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I don’t want to know, but tell me.

May 15, 2013

You know when you are in a critique group, whether online or in a face-to-face session, your stomach threatens to misbehave when your own stories are lacerated in a review? I was confident in many ways that ARIA: Left Luggage would survive book reviews because at least 10 experienced writers and several editors and two proofreaders have gone through it and their better suggestions had been incorporated. Even so, there is always a niggling feeling that while the concept of infectious amnesia is an original and fascinating concept, I could have treated it differently. A completely different plot. Yet, no one has actually suggested that. Instead I have received mostly encouraging reviews, and the occasional bizarre one.
By that I mean the reviewer liked the story and yet got it wrong. Reviewer Y for example, said Ryder was the one who’d opened the alien case before scarpering across the Atlantic to safety. Noooo. Reviewer W can’t wait for the sequel, ARIA: Returning Left Luggage so to find out how the aliens melt Snowdonia to lava. What? The Anafon Valley, dear readers, stays safe. That reviewer must have been reading more than my book at the same time! Several reviewers start writing a formal review, which often means a summary of the first third of the plot, then joke around pretending to have lost their memory.
So far I have not seen a bad review of ARIA. Another good one arrived today from poet, Emma Lee and it is on her blog at http://emmalee1.wordpress.com/2013/05/15/aria-left-luggage-geoff-nelder/
She makes an interesting point that I’d used metric instead of mph on a Welsh road sign. It shows how close she read the book. I don’t need to defend my use of metric but I might have thought that British road signs might have been in kph by 2015, the setting for the book considering I wrote it a few years ago. Most of British industry went metric in 1965 – the Meteorological Office went to Celsius, although they called in Centigrade, in 1962, but the TV presenters were under pressure to keep mentioning Fahrenheit until recently. I know Emma mentioned it only in passing and that it was only a niggle but such things can work on me. So… I searched for that metric road sign in my proofread document. I can only find a metric road speed sign that Manuel sees in Canada. Perhaps I missed it. So if you find a metric road sign in ARIA in Wales, please let me know and I’ll send you a free ebook of Hot Air or let you quiver with excitement with a pre-proofread copy of Xaghra’s Revenge.

ARIA is now listed on Ralan’s marketing website at

http://www.ralan.com/litboost/listings/aria-nelder.htm

Ralan Conley is famous for being the alternative to Duotrope as a writer’s resource for finding magazines and anthologies that might accept your short stories in speculative and humour fiction. Now Duotrope has sadly found itself needing to make a charge for subscription, I can see Ralan’s site being used more. Please send him a donation if you use his listings.

The ‘likes’ on my newish page on facebook is nearly 200 so if you are on fb and not liked ARIA yet please go to http://www.facebook.com/AriaTrilogy

Linking arms – a hugfest

April 21, 2013

You’ll laugh. When ARIA was relesed I should have created a page on facebook (apologies for those of you you hate fb or just don’t use it. I find it quirky and bossy at times but great for swapping photos and news with family and friends, including writer pals and their events). At last I have done it and it is at

http://www.facebook.com/AriaTrilogy

At least I hope it works for you. You can like that page even if you are not friends with me on facebook. I am aiming for at least 100 ‘likes’ but I must not obsess about it. Via the facebook page create process I invited – suggested – to all my 700 fb friends that they might Like the ARIA page but not many did. I think many of the requests disappeared into the wrong facebook email boxes. Last year facebook created new email addresses for users but most don’t know how to access them – or want to. Some of us changed that address to our normal one so we can see notifcations. But, again many users turn off their notifications or are too busy living their lives to be bothered to like a little ol page like mine.

Also to boost promotional potential I have signed (free) for a promotional authors database at

http://www.authorsdb.com/authors-directory/2426-geoff-nelder

This could be useful. Who knows? Some things take off big time while others die off even if they are a good idea like Authors Database and my link to it above. I’ve entered my ARIA book one for its cover contest. You never know.

Double Whammy in May – in a good way

April 15, 2013

The sequel in the ARIA trilogy has May 31st 2013 as the release date! ARIA: Returning Left Luggage is in the final stages of proofing, the art has been painted by Award-winning Andy Bigwood, and the promo engine is cranking up. By sheer coincidence May 31st is the day a while ago that my wife, Gaynor, was born. Luckily, she smiled when I mentioned her birthday is on the same day as the release of ARIA 2. Not so much, as poet, artist and writer Catherine Edmunds comments, a competing celebration – more using my book release as part of Gaynor’s birthday celebration. Yeay!

ARIA: Returning Left Luggage cover art by Andy Bigwood

ARIA: Returning Left Luggage cover art by Andy Bigwood

Of course reading the sequel would make more sense if you read the first book in the series – ARIA: Left Luggage – links at the bottom of this page. Not unique but unusual for a science fiction trilogy is that the first volume has NO aliens, no battles in space, no Earth people going on interstellar travels. I believe it helped making the book more enjoyable as a medical mystery with the infectious amnesia for non-SF readers, although such plot aspects weren’t needed for book one either.

LL-Publications have asked me for a 800-word excerpt to hook readers and media into book 2. It was easy to do this for Left Luggage because the beginning was just right. The prologue told of Jack, who caught the infectious amnesia (ARIA) at work then spread it on the bus home. It was unique – and amazingly the idea of infectious amnesia still is unique in the fiction (and non-fiction) world. A reader tells me she lost some memory and other brain problems when she contracted meningitis so that is a kind of amnesia that is infectious but not retrograde, nor with everyone catching it within a few yards. Any day I am expecting an experienced science fiction reader to say, hey I read about infectious amnesia in this book in the 1950/60/70s by Niven/Heinlein/Asimov but they haven’t yet… Would it matter if they did? No, because it isn’t possible to have original ideas in absolutely every story – tens of thousands come out each year. Each story is unique because of the blend of characters, sub-plots, settings, writing style and factor X. Even so, it is rather cool to have an original idea and to have it published. Come on film makers, contact LL-Publications and buy the movie rights!

The 800-word excerpts for Returning Left Luggage is proving harder to pick. There are many many scenes that I like very much and whittled them down to five. One is of an ARIA victim trying to find his wife in an abandoned port in the South Pacific. It illustrates much of the dystopian problems and scenery created by ARIA. Butbutbut it involves shooting dogs. They are feral and maddened by starvation but even so, it might alienate [sic] dog-loving readers so while it remains part of the whole book it will not appear on the press releases! The others are too long so whichever I choose will involve even more lacerating than in the proofreading. I have enlisted the help of the Orbiter critique group, who helped me edit ARIA and still do so for volume three. So I’ve sent three possible excerpts to Mark Iles, James Odell, Chris Riley and James Steel for a poll on the one they think is best for a hook. Thanks – I’ll let you know the outcome. Daughter voted for a scene where Manuel seeks food in an abandoned shop and is caught – maybe.

I am slowly building up a twitter following at http://twitter.com/geoffnelder but I notice that some people have over 100,000 followers yet only follow a few hundred. Then I discovered that you can BUY thousands of fake twitter friends, youtube likes, and other social media connections. Such falsehood is probably excused by some a marketing ploy but it’s not one with which I would feel comfortable. It’s not much different to those authors who have fake identities to create their own ‘brilliant’ reviews on Amazon and fake blogs. I don’t have many followers on twitter – around 800 – the number goes up and down daily – but at least they are real. I think!

Wigan ate my sweets

April 9, 2013

A warm feeling enveloped me at the Leigh & Wigan Words Festival yesterday as a small flash mob gathered around me in a corner of Wigan library to meet me. Mob might be an exaggeration of the quantity and an abuse of their good nature in the quality of their overt friendship. I’d come to talk about and sell copies of ARIA: Left Luggage but I wasn’t quite sure whether this was to be a simple sign and sell; move on to the next, or a reading, or a chat. No one seemed to know. Being a relatively small crowd we pulled their chairs into a semicircle with me, my box of sweets and books, facing them. I only knew one of them, Mike Hunt – the chair of the Festival committee and my friend from BeWrite Books days (RIP one of the most ethical publishing concerns). I’d met Joan on facebook but knew none of the others.

The group engaged me in interactive dialogue when I told them how I got the ideas behind ARIA with its unique concept of infectious amnesia, me being the first fiction writer to have received help from an astronaut in orbit, why science fiction allows me and readers to escape the limitations of setting our imagination on just one planet. The two hours flashed by and with great bonhomie they ate my chocs and bought my books.

A reporter and photographer from the Observer were there to quiz me for 20 minutes. Andrew Nowell was a cultured young man who recognised which Shakespearean reference is allured to in the title of my 2008 SF mystery – Exit, Pursued by a Bee. Clever chap. I look forward to reading his interview in me. All of you can when you buy the next copy of the Wigan Observer.

My nerves rattled in me for days in advance making me useless for fresh ideas and writing as well as domestic duties, but I need not have worried. Wigan Library is a fine new venue and the people are friendly – I didn’t even have to wear a rugby shirt.

I had ordered a large screen TV to show my short video trailer of ARIA but even a small screen wasn’t available. Shame. The youtube version of it has now reached 500 viewers! Go on, make it 501 now! ARIA video trailer here

Will Self drew a greater crowd and good for him, one day, one day…

A piece of practical advice which I’m told – after the event – by the chairman, is to ensure the blurb for flyers and advertisements emphasise that it isn’t just a signing but a discussion with the actual author. Apparently, more people would have attended if they knew that.

Upcoming4me has an intriguing piece about how I thought of and influences behind ARIA here.

Exit, Pursued by a Bee link is here

I have sweets!

April 6, 2013

I fear I am going to be lonely at my book signing of ARIA: Left Luggage even though it won the ‘Best science fiction novel of 2012′ at the P&E Readers’ Poll. If you or your friends live in Lancashire or Merseyside, please point them in the direction of Wigan Library, Life Centre North, The Wiend, WN1 1NH where on Monday April 8th between 2-4pm I’ll be signing copies of ARIA and other books.

Yes, I have sweets!

Courtesy of The Sweet Club

Courtesy of The Sweet Club

It would be fantastic to meet with fellow writers and readers there. In fact I’d give you one of my books for free if you turned up if you mention this blog. Or your family and friends – so there!

My signing is part of the Leigh & Wigan Words Together Festival 2013, which is being organised by a former BeWrite buddy Michael Hunt. The train station is only a few minutes away.

The famous writer and raconteur, Will Self, will be there too – well, at the festival, not with me in the library, at that time but hey ho.

 

I had a story acceptance today from Futures – a management non-fiction academic journal. The issue has a focus of the relationship between science fiction and technological development. It seems that for every invention dreamed up by a science fiction writer, there is some archivist who will discover it already thought of by a scientist or engineer in the past. However, there is no way any archivist can know this for certain. Creative people imagine ideas all the time, whether they are scientists, engineers, poets, artists or scribblers like me. To keep tabs and track through a particular idea will never be perfectly accurate and does it matter anyway? I doubt if any science fiction writer is upset at the notion that their oeuvre has been discussed already because the process is individualised by them. I believe that the notion of infectious amnesia hasn’t been used before my ARIA trilogy but the uniqueness of that idea astonishes me. Hence I won’t be overwhelming surprised when some wag one day points me in the direction of a novel that already used it in the past. Every story is unique – the characters make it so. (see what I did there with Captain Picard’s famous line in every of his Star Trek episodes? You have to be a Trekkie to appreciate or to groan). The accepted story is Auditory Crescendo, which has been revised since its first publication. Funny because I had announced its acceptance months ago but I should have waited for the official say so today.

 

How to Win Short Story Competitions are steady. Get yours here.

Exit, Pursued by a Bee is at http://geoffnelder.com/exitbee.htm Several readers have pointed out recently that a principle notion in that book is being proved true. Ie that the universe might be chaotic but that the Earth is in a kind of bubble of stability. In Exit that stability is shaken when alien artifacts leave. Just shows that fiction might not be so unbelievable after all.

ARIA: Left Luggage continues to sell copies to wise readers. Links areKindle – Amazon.com http://www.amazon.com/ARIA-Left-Luggage-ebook/dp/B008RADGYC/Paperback Amazon.com http://www.amazon.com/ARIA-Left-Luggage-Volume-1/dp/1905091958/Kindle – UK – http://www.amazon.co.uk/ARIA-Left-Luggage-ebook/dp/B008RADGYC/Paperback UK http://www.amazon.co.uk/ARIA-Left-Luggage-Geoff-Nelder/dp/1905091958/Publisher’s website with more details and formats. http://www.ll-publications.com/leftluggage.html  Buy it quick before you run out of memory!

You tube video trailer http://youtu.be/oh0AAXIe8VU

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Whitstable by Stephen Volk

March 29, 2013

WHITSTABLE by Stephen Volkwhitstable

 

A Spectral Press: Spectral Visions III publication

Publication date: May 26th 2013

 

A review by Geoff Nelder

I have not reviewed a novella quite like this. The protagonist is a real person. Yes, I’ve reviewed fictional biographies but they’ve been of people in the distant past – eg The Other Boleyn Girl by Philippa Gregory, not of someone I could have met and who, via the film media, we all have an intimate connection. It is kind of a fan fiction then, but far superior to most.

Peter Cushing was born on May 26th 1913. Exactly a century later this novella will be released as a homage to the legendary actor, who lived with his wife in Whitstable.

 

Stephen Volk clearly researched Cushing’s life in great detail but this is not a biography. It is fiction and yet, as a film goer and Doctor Who watcher, I fell under the spell of Volk’s narrative and can say my disbelief was suspended in its reading. A reader should be forgiven if he or she believed this story was based on a real event.

 

The story is set in Whitstable in Kent in 1971 shortly after Peter Cushing’s wife died. He’s fraught with grief, feeling more like an old man than the young fifty-seven-year-old he really is. Morbidly insular he leaves his house to keep away from prying visitors but encounters a young boy who thinks the actor is Doctor Van Helsing, Cushing’s vampire hunting character in the Hammer films. The boy seeks help to vanquish his mother’s boyfriend, who is a vampire, or some other form of evil.

 

Although the story is woven around the boy’s concerns, transferred to Cushing, who takes on the vampire-hunt challenge for real as a welcome distraction from his grief, we experience much more than the plot. Between the bread of the main story is whole-fruit cinema jam, enough to make any horror fan salivate. Volk makes Cushing relate everything to something filmed by him or his contemporaries in a smorgasbord of cinema delight. Accordingly, the action in the novella reads as if a camera follows Cushing. For example he sees a boy about ten years old standing at an inquisitive distance, head tilted to one side with slats of cloud behind him and a substantial book under his arm.’ And in his conversation we have the boy picking at flaking paint on a signpost.

Resonance for me exist in little asides. Cushing is deluged with unopened manuscripts teetering in piles in his house. I had a literary agent in Stirling who vanished. When one of her clients persuaded the police to force her door there were heaps of unopened manuscripts, mostly in brown paper parcels tied with string, all the way up her stairs. She’s still missing but that’s another story.

There are aspects of the narrative that don’t ring quite true for me as a teacher and recipient of childspeak for decades. I don’t think a ten-year-old boy would make such long speeches so coherently from such an inarticulate family background and use words like ‘determined’, ‘crumbled’; although as a horror film enthusiast he might well say ‘vanquished’.  Would an English junior schoolboy say ‘Movies’? Perhaps he would as he is surrounded by movie books and films, but it jarred a little. Not so much jarred as shocked when I found Volk had named the boy as Carl Drinkwater. Grief, I taught him at a school in Chester!

Volk certainly grabs other characteristics of children. ‘“No,” the boy said, sounding supremely affronted, as if he was dealing with an idiot.’ Haha my grandson does that to me and he’s only four. As do my granddaughters though by then I’m thinking it’s more about me.

A fascinating dialogue occurs between Cushing and Carl’s mother. She accuses horror films of being a bad influence on children. Interestingly this debate is in my family too. Batman’s activities create nightmares in my grandson. (though it could be a scam by him to have extra hugs in bed with mum). Cushing’s response, which I rather like, is that he doesn’t make horror films so much as enable an experience of fantasy , an escapism from the humdrum but one in which Good prevails over Evil.

Whitstable offers us insights into the acting profession. Love such quotes that I assume are either legitimate, or should be, such as the one from Olivier to Cushing: “Be sincere, dear boy, always be sincere—and when you’ve faked that, you’ve cracked it.” Note the ironic humour, and there are other lighter moments in what otherwise could have been too gloomy in its poignancy particularly the unwritten point that Cushing’s heavy smoking was probably a factor in his wife’s fatal emphysema. I admit to amusing myself, as Cushing does, in this clip:

“You’re Christopher Lee aren’t you?”

He corrected her with consummate politeness, tugging on his white cotton glove.

“No, I’m the other one.”

“Vincent Price?”

He kept his smile to himself. “That’s right.”

I also like his conversations with his deceased wife – consoling and urging him to have faith in himself. And as a reflection of his view that fantasy represents his work more than horror, he says: “Concentration camp: that’s true horror.” I say the same to my wife when she says something a tad awkward is a nightmare. No, a giant slimey monster eating you from your toes up is a nightmare!

There’s so much more in this novella, which has the depth and characterization of a novel. As a story it really finishes before the end, but aficionados of Cushing’s films, including Stephen Volk, and I, clearly didn’t want to stop.

The Afterword by Mark Morris is homage in action, a declaration of love and appreciation of the genre as portrayed by Peter Cushing and of the man himself.

A Spectral Press: Spectral Visions III publication

Publication date: May 26th 2013

Available in Ltd Hardback and unlimited Paperback

Retail: £17.50 (UK) / 24€ (EU) / $30.00 USA / $30.00 RoW

Available from the publishers: Spectral Press, 5 Serjeants Green, Neath Hill, Milton Keynes, Bucks, MK14 6HA, United Kingdom.

Pre-orders:  http://spectralpress.wordpress.com/2013/01/31/whitstable-news-and-pre-orders/

Web: http://spectralpress.wordpress.com  | Email: spectralpress@gmail.com 

 

Nelder News:

Sales of How to Win Short Story Competitions are steady. Get yours here.

Exit, Pursued by a Bee is at http://geoffnelder.com/exitbee.htm Several readers have pointed out recently that a principle notion in that book is being proved true. Ie that the universe might be chaotic but that the Earth is in a kind of bubble of stability. In Exit that stability is shaken when alien artifacts leave. Just shows that fiction might not be so unbelievable after all.

ARIA: Left Luggage continues to sell copies to wise readers. Links are

Kindle – Amazon.com  http://www.amazon.com/ARIA-Left-Luggage-ebook/dp/B008RADGYC/

Paperback Amazon.com http://www.amazon.com/ARIA-Left-Luggage-Volume-1/dp/1905091958/

Kindle – UK – http://www.amazon.co.uk/ARIA-Left-Luggage-ebook/dp/B008RADGYC/

Paperback UK  http://www.amazon.co.uk/ARIA-Left-Luggage-Geoff-Nelder/dp/1905091958/

Publisher’s website with more details and formats. http://www.ll-publications.com/leftluggage.html

Buy it quick before you run out of memory!

You tube video trailer  http://youtu.be/oh0AAXIe8VU

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Emergence by Gary Fry

March 27, 2013

emergenceEmergence by Gary Fry

Published by DarkFuse in March 2013

ASIN: B00BYFFQJU

 

When a retired teacher looks after his young grandson, he discovers more than mysterious cones on the beach. The two of them find their deficiencies counterbalance each other making their loving relationship able to combat menacing phenomenon.

 

I’ve always rebelled against symmetry but there are moments when I can appreciate it, such as the Parthenon although seeing higgledy-piggeldy residences on a Spanish hilltop in random shapes pleases me more. I was the one who graffitied my sixth-form college with “Entropy will win” and yet when I encountered a pattern, even aspects of fearful symmetry in Emergence, it brought a warmth, a smile of appreciation.

The symmetries are more balances such as new and old, the emergence [sic] of understanding in a young boy versus the decline in the facilities of the senior character; the strangeness inherent in written alphanumeric characters when examined minutely by granddad finds resonance in the boy’s dyslexia then again later in the plot. Mention of which I ought to allude to for this review’s readers. Spot the similarities in my life – a coincidence?

A mother leaves her seven-year-old son, Paul, in the charge of Jack, his widowed grandfather. I too, am occasionally obliged (with pleasure) to supervise and edutain grandchildren. Jack is a retired teacher and so am I. Beautiful phrasing here “He’d been a good teacher, before cultural conditions had become so challenging that the task of pedagogy had been usurped by damage limitation.” Every former teacher will be nodding reading that. Jack is in his sixties, so am I. Jack lives on the coast of North East England – I don’t but my dad did, and I have been known to scramble for miles along the beaches looking for fossils and semi-precious stones. Jack finds conical objects sticking out of the beach. I found ichthyosaurus bones (and coprolite – fossil poo) on a beach. Grandson Paul and Jack get as excited about their beach discoveries as I do with mine, but there the story reaches the edginess of rationality allowing spooky paranormality to weave its ‘magic’ into the plot.

We don’t know the precise location of Jack’s house except that it is far enough away from the ‘silver tsunami of old people’ in estates of the elderly inhabiting many coastal honey pots around Britain.

Jack worries about a possible onset of dementia manifested by a recent difficulty with reading. He ought to consider AMD as the cause and treat other symptoms of old age with denial, as I do. Some aspects of life are immutable to Jack – and to all of us – such as “boys playing in sand is an inviolable cosmic rule”. A concept finding symmetry later.

Events in Emergence become more dramatic both on the beach and in Jack’s bungalow. He’s remarkably cool, considering the accelerating of weirdness happening in their isolated location, and he’s the responsibility of being in charge of Paul, but then the lad has skills offsetting Jack’s out-of-date expertise. The boy comes up with hypotheses for the oddities happening.

Although there is a science fantasy theme here, the story is more about the relationship between a grandfather and his grandson. It is beautifully crafted. Look out AL Kennedy and MR James even if they marry and produce literary offspring.

It could be said that there is a danger of both characters being too affable and the conflict in the narrative relies on the plot events. However, both man and boy have problems, which present their own conflicts resolved to an extent by them both having a meeting of minds – met my mind too.

Jack’s wife was a teacher, and so is mine. A gathering of coincidences then as I suggest above? No, although Gary Fry knows little about my life we now have proof of quantum entanglement. I am merely a particle of an atom, the other particle of which is a pen on the coast near Whitby. More stories like this and there will be a tsunami of literary tourists plaguing the Fry hideaway. Be warned.

 

The cover art above is a link to Amazon.com Kindle

For UK Kindles click here.

Or go to DarkFuse website here

 

The keys to babies’ happiness

March 22, 2013

Although there are downsides to children using computers, such as spending too long on them, repetitive strain injury, addiction, obesity, learning the wrong things, web abuse, but there are jolly good things too. Supervised, children from one onwards can avoid all the above and be enriched. They can enjoy learning via colours, sounds, and touch by everlasting patient software. They get used to manipulating technology as if it’s an extension of themselves and develop skills in addition to the conventional learning and playing methods. You didn’t have to persuade me. I wrote colour, shape and sound simulation programs for my children’s infant school way back in the 1980s on the BBC Microcomputer. Both our kids grew up being used to computers and Robert makes his living programming them.clubtoddler

Then thirty years later along came our grandchildren. None of my programs work on the new computers. Actually they would by running BBC BASIC or RM BASIC emulators, but they have a tendency to crash the PCs and show their decrepit age compared to today’s software. I searched the web for kid friendly software and found quite a lot. However, one stood out because it disabled normal functions of the keyboard such that the children couldn’t get out of the program and on into other software even accidentally. Giggles Baby did all that and more. Our grandkids, even those under one, really did giggle and shake with excitement when they made sounds and colours and funny creatures dance on screen with each key press.

 

Giggles Baby was installed via CD but the programmer, Tim Leverett, saw his future for the business in making the software run online. He calls it Club Toddler. There is a token cost for the full package but you can use the basics for free by registering at http://www.clubtoddler.com/

 

Now here’s the funny thing. To register, you have to download the ‘engine’ of the suite of programs – fine. Then register with an email address and password. Oops. The software wouldn’t let me enter the @ in my email. I thought maybe it was something I’d done wrong. Tried number lock, caps lock, etc. I rebooted the computer but the problem was stubborn. I tried other keys. Nope. So I emailed Tim Leverett who promptly replied saying only one other person had reported a problem but had been quiet since. He tried fixes. Then Tim mentioned that the @ was above the 2 on his keyboard. It’s above the ‘ on mine with “ above the 2. We knew that continental Europe had Zwerty instead of Qwerty keyboards but didn’t know that US keyboards were subtly different from those in the UK. No problem, he engineered a fix so that UK folk can register Club Toddler. Yeay.

 

It gets better. Tim is an aspiring writer of science fiction. He’d browsed through my website at http://geoffnelder.com and came up with a mutual benefit plan. Would I give him an assessment of a film treatment he’d written for a science fiction story in exchange for me having premium membership of Club Toddler for life? Yes! I can’t wait to both read through Tim’s oeuvre and show his software to my grandkids.

 

Other news

Free giveaway of ARIA and an ARIA T-shirt in an easy competition draw! Just hop along to the front page of http://bibliophilia.org with its link to the video trailer and buying links.

 

I learnt that my short story, Accident Waiting to Happen, was not only accepted by eFantasy magazine but published in their February edition. You can grab a copy cover6-225x300from their website here. The story is set in the Madrid National library but the idea came from my wife while we were driving along the M56. She saw a badly listing lorry and said, ‘There’s an accident waiting to happen.’ I said, ‘That’s a good title for a story.’ It turns out to be a romance and a mild horror at the same time. I once needed a large book on the Bindweed plant in Widnes library and another large book teeetered on a top shelf… Such are the musings that result in stories being written. (the Bindweed research comes into ARIA: Returning Left Luggage).

Sales of How to Win Short Story Competitions are steady. Get yours here.

Exit, Pursued by a Bee is at http://geoffnelder.com/exitbee.htm Several readers have pointed out recently that a principle notion in that book is being proved true. Ie that the universe might be chaotic but that the Earth is in a kind of bubble of stability. In Exit that stability is shaken when alien artifacts leave. Just shows that fiction might not be so unbelievable after all.

Join me on twitter at http://twitter.com/geoffnelder

 

What is thing called Life?

February 27, 2013

Gridlinked by Neal Asher was chosen to be read by the citizens of Chester for discussion at the Chester Library Science Fiction and Fantasy Book Group in February. For those that enjoy a James Bond meets Space Cowboys shoot ‘em action book then this will suit them. The plot isn’t superficial, there are complexities and twists and the gadgetry, while not original to SF readers, has novel approaches to their use. Some complained that the characters are two-dimensional and many are. Ian Cormac, the special agent protagonist has speech and behavioural mannerisms too similar to one of the antagonists, John Stanton. The latter, although a villain is possibly the most likeable character and displays tangible grief and emotion.

Rather than deconstruct Gridlinked, I want to discuss the real question in the book. How human can a robot be? Cormac has his intricate connection to Gridlink removed because the instant access to the powerful future internet in his head was dehumanising him. He was becoming cold, frigid in the way he treated people. On the other hand, Artificial Intelligence androids in the book were remarkably human in looks and behaviour even though they were stronger and were made to survive in environments that would kill humans. Yet, their brains were computers and so not human. What is it that makes us human? Philosophers have asked this for millennia but now with androids just around the corner it becomes more relevant. Humans have self-awareness, it is said. One test to see if animals have self-awareness is to place a mirror before them. Cats have been seen to preen themselves while looking in a mirror so that’s a positive indication. Dogs either ignore mirrors or go round the back of them to see where the rest of the ‘other’ dog is. So maybe canines lack as much self-awareness as cats. Tricky to know for sure. With a robot or sentient Artificial Intelligence gadget (even a sentient space suit as in my short story The Judgement Rock, published in Screaming Dreams in 2008 Download for free here) displays behaviour beyond mere pre-programmed activity, might they have a right to life? Many humans would insist such AI should have emotions and those are an animal attribute. Perhaps, but my training in cognitive psychology as a young trainee teacher taught me that emotions might be an outcome of our complex neuron web, and something learned as an interaction between memories and reactions from other beings. Like love then? Who knows. Then the religious will argue humans – but not our canine pals – have souls and so are superior to future androids. Even if you could identify the existence of a soul as separate from a self-aware emotional state, would that give humans the moral right to end the existence of a sentient being? I’d say not and that’s the main reason I am a veggie but there might be situations for survival in which in self-defence another being might have to be extinguished.

All thought-provoking stuff but sadly not argued through and only whispered at in Gridlinked.

As said, the book is a shoot ‘em up. In the right mood I can enjoy gung-ho action movies like the James Bond series this book is too much like. On the other hand I don’t enjoy reading them. Reading takes longer than watching a film and it gives me time to reflect more. What I think about then troubles me. When many beings die for superficial reasons such as vengeance, theft, King-of-the-castle behaviour eg extending one’s borders, it irks me and I stop enjoying it. I worry about other people being indoctrinated into thinking such mass killing of men, women, children, and sentient others, is okay for trivial reasons. Books take time to read and digest and in my opinion should be more responsible for making ethical statements than a quick adventure entertainment film. Am I being too high-horsey? Probably. Have I written violence and morbid death scenes? Yes, here and there but not have a whole novel with shootings and space cowboy killings. Oh, but I’m in trouble. ARIA: Left Luggage kills six billion people from infectious amnesia. Oh dear. Like all apocalyptic stories it is more than the sum of those deaths. I can justify it because it is a logical conclusion from the premise of the virus and the focus in the story is on survival rather than the horrible deaths from forgetting everything including medications, reading, writing, and talking.

Speaks of ARIA; I am doing a reading, chat and signing as part of the Wigan & Leigh Literary Festival. Monday April 8th 2-4pm in Wigan Library if you are around. Failing that maybe you have family and friends up in the vicinity for me to meet and greet.

Plug

ARIA is on the front page of http://bibliophilia.org with link to trailer and buying links.

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Exit, Pursued by a Bee is at http://geoffnelder.com/exitbee.htm Several readers have pointed out recently that a principle notion in that book is being proved true. Ie that the universe might be chaotic but that the Earth is in a kind of bubble of stability. In Exit that stability is shaken when alien artifacts leave. Just shows that fiction might not be so unbelievable after all.

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Suspending my disbelief

February 20, 2013

I rarely have sufficient time to read the Guardian newspaper even though it is my paper of choice for content and style. On long train journeys and Saturdays, however, I make time. This Saturday – 16th February 2013 – there was an article by Ian McEwan in the Review section entitled ‘Am I Really A Believer’ that struck a chord. It was about how when reading fiction there are occasions when you suddenly realize you can’t suspend your disbelief and so the story is spoilt.

This used to happen to me a lot as a youngster and visits me quite often especially when reading the swashbuckling type of science fiction. There am I immersed in the head of the main character, believing in his or her motives and feeling their angst when suddenly I stop and think – someone has made this up! Damn. The plague of disbelief then spreads to other books I’m reading and worse, to my own writing.

Apparently so, to Ian McEwan. His prescriptive palliative is to reread short stories that always takes him back into that world inside someone else’s head. One such for him is Nabakov’s Symbols and Signs. I understand that. It’s been more than a decade since I’d read that short story about an elderly couple whose deranged and suicidal son is in an asylum. Sounds grim but the emotion and setting grips you profoundly. It’s also an example of the semiotics of zero: ie the main focus is actually absent. You can read it for free here. It was first published in 1947 and so I have an affinity being I was born that year. However, I cannot help but read a story as if it had been submitted to me as a submissions editor or a competition judge. Hence I find myself wanting less passive voice and pleonasms in the first third of the story. Then it takes over. Such imagery and emotion. I can see why it shakes McEwan into believing again. I get the same reaction when I read any of AL Kennedy’s short stories, or Tibor Fischer’s The Thought Gang. Ironically, knowing there is a cure for not being able to suspend disbelief, is a cure in itself although it might take a day or two for it to work.

In Nabakov’s Symbols and Signs the son suffers from Referential Mania in which everything around him is a veiled reference to his personality and existence. I can empathise with that. The boy’s attempted suicides are not to end his life and put an end to misery as it might be for others but to tear a hole in the fabric of his existence and escape to another, better one. I can see that too. As a life long lover of the skies – both academically and emotionally – I get this line in which “clouds transmit to each other, by means of slow signs…” wonderful.

Speaking of wonderment. Oliver (four years old plus a little) was in the library with mum (our daughter) choosing dinosaur books. As they were about to leave he rushed to another stack and picked out a book. Mum said You wouldn’t like that one. Oliver said, It’s not for me – it’s for Pop. (I am Pop).  Mum said It’s good of you to think of choosing a book for Pop but why this one? (It’s a Mills & Boon

Oliver and me

Oliver and me

Romance – Captain and the Wallflower by Lyn Stone) Pop mostly likes Science Fiction like those over there. Oliver – No, Pop will like this book. It’s full of words. Look!

Last note:

Funny how twitter followers to me go down by handful each week. Is it something I said, not said? Or do those numbers represent those who give up on using Twitter altogether? If you are on twitter and would like to follow me I am at http://twitter.com/geoffnelder

About time I plugged some of my stuff on this blog thing and so

ARIA is on the front page of http://bibliophilia.org with link to trailer and buying links.

Sales of How to Win Short Story Competitions are steady. Get yours here.

Exit, Pursued by a Bee is at http://geoffnelder.com/exitbee.htm Several readers have pointed out recently that a principle notion in that book is being proved true. Ie that the universe might be chaotic but that the Earth is in a kind of bubble of stability. In Exit that stability is shaken when alien artefacts leave. Just shows that fiction might not be so unbelievable after all.


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